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In the Well


The late afternoon sun cast long shadows across the dirt road as Estaria made his way home from the bakery. The warm scent of fresh bread still clung to his clothes, a pleasant trace of the errand. A cool breeze rustled through the wheat fields, stirring golden stalks in rolling waves.

He took another step—and something shifted inside him. Not physically. Deeper, like someone had reached into his chest and twisted something essential. Estaria froze, a hand pressed to his sternum. It wasn’t painful, exactly, but it felt wrong—like a joint bent the wrong way or a tooth slightly out of place.

The sensation tugged at him, pulling toward the old Carpenter well, long abandoned and half-collapsed. Everyone in Appledale avoided it. Parents warned their children about the deep shaft and crumbling stones.

“No,” Estaria muttered, shaking his head. He turned for home. But with each step away, the pressure sharpened—insistent, piercing, like a splinter driving inward.

He stopped again, sweat beading on his brow despite the breeze. Gritting his teeth, he turned back toward the well. Instantly, the sensation eased—like a knot loosening in his chest.

The well lay past Tanner’s fallow field, beyond a stand of maple trees just starting to turn with autumn. Against his better judgment, Estaria walked toward it, each step bringing more relief.

Dried grass crunched underfoot. The paper-wrapped loaf sagged in his arms, suddenly too heavy. The worn stone well came into view—moss-streaked, cracked from years of frost and neglect.

The strange pull narrowed, guiding him not just toward the well, but to a precise spot beside it. His feet stopped on their own, at the broken edge where stones had tumbled away to expose the dark earth below. The tugging stopped completely, replaced by a strange, anchored certainty.

He peered over the rim, careful to keep his weight back. The usual darkness was broken by a flicker of light below. He blinked, unsure if it was real or some trick of the failing daylight.

Estaria studied the well’s interior. The stone walls were rough-hewn, with plenty of gaps and protrusions. The shaft was narrow enough that he could probably brace himself against both sides. His hands could find purchase in the cracks while his feet pushed against the opposite wall. It would be like climbing down between two buildings, something he and the other children had done plenty of times in the narrow alleys behind the granary.

He took off his jacket and laid it beside the bread. The stone felt cool and damp under his palms as he tested his weight against the wall. Finding solid holds, he swung his legs into the well, pressing his boots against the opposite side. The position was awkward but stable.

The descent was slow. Each movement had to be deliberate - one hand down to find the next hold, then a careful slide of his boots against the opposite wall. Moss and moisture made some sections treacherous, forcing him to test each grip before committing his weight. The flickering light below grew steadily brighter, casting his shadow up the shaft as he descended.

Sweat trickled down his back despite the well’s coolness. His arms began to burn from the effort of holding his weight. But what truly unsettled him was the silence from below. Angel hadn’t said another word since he’d started climbing down.

About ten feet from the bottom, the well’s shaft suddenly opened into a larger space. The walls fell away on either side, leaving him hanging above what appeared to be a natural cavern. The firelight revealed rough stone walls stretching out into darkness.

“You can drop from there,” Angel called up. “It’s not far.”

Estaria took a deep breath, then let go. He landed with a grunt on packed earth, his knees flexing to absorb the impact. As he straightened, his eyes adjusted to the dim light.

A small fire burned in a crude stone circle, casting flickering shadows across the cavern walls. Angel sat beside it, her face partially hidden in shadow. Her usual pink dress was smudged with dirt, and her auburn curls had come loose from their ribbon. The flames reflected in her eyes, making them seem darker than usual.

“Angel?” Estaria asked, taking a step toward her. “What’s going on?”

The flickering firelight revealed tear tracks cutting through the dirt on Angel’s face. She sat hunched, arms wrapped around her knees, staring into the flames as if they held answers to questions Estaria couldn’t hear.

His boots scuffed against the packed earth as he approached, careful not to startle her. The cavern air hung heavy with the scent of damp stone and woodsmoke. He lowered himself beside her, close enough to offer comfort but not so near as to crowd her.

“What is this place?” he asked softly, his voice barely carrying over the crack and pop of burning wood.

Angel drew a shaky breath. “My thinking spot.” She wiped her cheek with the back of her hand, smearing more dirt across it. “I come here when I need to be alone.”

Estaria glanced around the cavern. The firelight didn’t reach the edges, leaving the walls in deep shadow. The space felt both intimate and vast, like a pocket carved out of the earth itself. “How did you find it?”

She shrugged, still not meeting his eyes. Her fingers picked at a loose thread on her dress.

“Angel, talk to me. Please?” He leaned forward, trying to catch her gaze. “What happened?”

Angel picked up a twig and tossed it into the fire. The motion was sharp at first, then slack—like she’d meant to throw it hard but lost the will halfway through. She stared into the flames. “Nothing happened.”

“You’re hurt.”

“The rope broke.” She gestured vaguely upward. “I wasn’t very high up, but I landed wrong. My ankle…” She trailed off, touching her right foot gingerly.

Estaria’s eyes dropped to her ankle. Even in the dim light, he could see the swelling. “We should get you home, have someone look at that.”

“There’s a way out,” Angel said, pointing toward the far side of the cavern. “A passage. But it branches off into tunnels, and I’ve never…” She shook her head. “I’ve tried exploring them before, but they’re like a maze. I always came back here.”

The fire popped, sending sparks spiraling upward. They watched them fade into the darkness above. Estaria wanted to ask more questions - why she came here, what she was running from, why she hadn’t told him about this place before. But Angel’s posture remained closed off, her eyes fixed on the flames, and he knew pushing would only make her retreat further.

Instead, he reached out and squeezed her hand gently. Her fingers were cold despite the fire’s warmth. She squeezed back, a silent acknowledgment of everything unsaid between them.

They sat in silence for a while, watching the flames dance. Water dripped somewhere in the darkness, a steady rhythm that marked time’s passage. The fire burned lower, casting longer shadows across their faces.

“How did you know?” Angel asked suddenly, her voice barely above a whisper. “How did you know I was down here?”

Estaria remembered the strange pulling sensation that had led him to the well. He opened his mouth to explain, then closed it again. How could he describe something he didn’t understand himself?

“I just… knew something was wrong,” he said finally. The explanation felt inadequate, but it was all he could offer.

Angel nodded, accepting this without question. She shifted again, grimacing as her ankle moved. The firelight caught the dried tears on her cheeks, making them glisten like crystal tracks through the dirt.

“I should get you home,” Estaria said, studying her ankle with growing concern. The swelling seemed worse than before.

“No!” Angel’s voice snapped—louder than before. Or maybe it just echoed more down here. She stood halfway, winced, then dropped back down, shoulders tight. She wouldn’t look at him. “I’m fine.” Her jaw clenched. “Just—don’t.”

They sat in the flickering light, sharing silence as the last rays of sun faded above—like the day was closing a door.

Estaria rose to his feet, the packed earth shifting beneath his boots. The far wall was uneven, sloped — almost a trick of shadow. But as he approached, the echo in his chest changed. The wall felt normal enough—but there was a gap in what he was feeling.

He ran his hand along the stone. Cold. Slick in places. Then—space. A low seam where the rock receded, just enough for air to pass through. A faint draft brushed his cheek, too thin to be weather, too sure to be imagined.

A tunnel.

He turned back toward Angel, who hadn’t moved from the fire. “There’s a way out,” he said softly. “I can feel it.”

He extended his hand toward Angel, offering silent support. She hesitated for just a moment before sliding her fingers into his, allowing him to carefully pull her upright. She swayed slightly, favoring her injured ankle.

Without thinking, Estaria wrapped his arm around her waist, providing a stable anchor. Angel leaned into him, her breath catching as she tested her weight. The scent of apples and earth clung to her hair, familiar and comforting despite their predicament.

They made their way toward the tunnel entrance, their combined shadow stretching before them in the dying firelight. The passage loomed ahead, a throat of absolute darkness waiting to swallow them. Angel’s grip on his shoulder tightened as they crossed the threshold.

The darkness was immediate and complete. The rough stone walls pressed close on either side, forcing them to move sideways, still linked together. Their footsteps echoed strangely, creating phantom sounds that seemed to come from all directions.

Something shifted inside Estaria, that same peculiar sensation from earlier, but stronger now. In the pitch black, with only Angel’s warmth and the stone beneath his fingers for reference, the feeling became crystal clear - an awareness that filled his chest and spread through his limbs.

A crack split the silence. Estaria froze. Loose stone clattered ahead—and the hum in his chest flared. Instinct moved faster than thought. He yanked Angel back.

A moment later, the tunnel collapsed in front of them with a deafening roar.

Angel’s fingers dug into his arm as dust and debris washed over them. The sound of falling rock gradually subsided, replaced by their rapid breathing and the settling of disturbed earth.

“Are you alright?” Estaria’s voice came out hoarse.

“Yes.” Angel’s reply was barely more than a whisper. “How did you know?”

Estaria had no answer. That strange internal resonance still pulsed through him, stronger than ever in the absolute darkness. It felt almost like a second heartbeat.

They inched forward until they reached the fresh collapse. Estaria ran his hands over the fallen rocks, feeling for any sign of passage. The stones were cool and rough beneath his fingers, some still settling with quiet clicks and scrapes.

“There’s a gap,” he said, feeling a draft of air. “It’s tight, but I think we can make it through.”

He helped Angel lower herself to the ground, wincing at her sharp intake of breath when her ankle bumped against stone.

“I’ll go first,” he said, glancing back. “Follow right behind me.”

He slid forward, one elbow at a time. Gravel dug into his chest, scraping through his shirt. He pressed his cheek to the ground, turning his head sideways just to fit. The ceiling dropped so low he could feel the stone brushing his back with every breath.

The dark wasn’t just around him now—it was inside him. It soaked into his skin, pooled in his lungs. He blinked, and saw no difference.

Behind him, Angel shifted. A loose stone clattered. She inhaled sharply, and he froze. Waited. Listened.

Nothing.

He crawled forward again, dragging himself inch by inch. The world shrank to pressure points: elbows grinding, knees catching, ribs dragging. His fingers found stone, crack, push. Again.

And again.

The silence was total. Not empty—but full. Full of breath and heartbeat and the soft grind of movement. Full of what wasn’t being said.

Angel’s shallow breathing filled the tunnel behind him, fast and clipped. She was afraid. They both were.

Time blurred. He didn’t know if he’d been crawling for minutes or hours. The pain in his arms was constant now. His shoulders burned. His knees screamed every time he shifted forward.

Still, the world pressed in.

He wondered—briefly—if this was it. If they’d misjudged. If they’d just get stuck here, caught between too many sharp edges and too little space, and no one would ever find them. If—

Then: cool air.

It touched his face like a whisper, and the humming in his chest pulsed softly in reply. Not a warning. Not a push. Just presence.

He reached forward again, and his hand found space above.

He tumbled into a wider space, rolling onto his back, gasping. His shirt was torn at the shoulders, skin scraped raw from the tight passage. His lungs pulled at the air like they hadn’t breathed in hours.

He turned back immediately. “Angel,” he called softly, “reach for me.”

A moment’s hesitation—then her fingers brushed his. He caught hold and pulled gently as she wriggled free from the gap. Her face was streaked with dirt, her breath ragged, but she was through.

They lay there on the stone, side by side in the dark, not speaking.

The hum in Estaria’s chest faded to a low thrum—not urgent, not gone. Just resting.

Angel shifted beside him, her shoulder brushing his. “We made it,” she whispered.

Estaria didn’t answer. He just squeezed her hand and listened to the silence again.

This time, it didn’t feel empty.

Moments later, Estaria helped Angel through the narrow opening, pushing aside thick curtains of vines. The sweet scent of night-blooming flowers mingled with the earthy dampness of the cave they’d left behind. His legs trembled from the climb, muscles protesting each step as they emerged onto soft grass.

Moonlight silvered the landscape before them. A small lake stretched out, its surface mirror-smooth and reflecting the star-speckled sky above. Ancient willow trees lined the shore, their trailing branches creating shadowy grottos at the water’s edge. The scene was hauntingly beautiful – and completely unfamiliar.

“Where are we?” Angel asked, leaning heavily against him. Her face was pale in the moonlight, drawn with exhaustion and pain.

“I don’t know.” Estaria scanned the shoreline, trying to get his bearings. Nothing looked familiar. The resonance that had guided them through the cave had faded to a faint hum in his chest, casually inviting him westward.

A structure caught his eye – a small shack nestled among the willows at the water’s edge. Though weathered and listing slightly to one side, its basic frame appeared intact. Most importantly, it offered shelter.

“There.” He adjusted his grip on Angel’s waist. “Think you can make it that far?”

She nodded, gritting her teeth as they picked their way carefully across the uneven ground. Tall grass brushed against their legs, heavy with dew that quickly soaked through their clothes. The night air held an autumn chill that hadn’t been present in the cave.

The shack’s door hung askew on rusted hinges. Estaria eased Angel down to sit on a relatively sturdy-looking crate while he investigated. Moonlight filtered through gaps in the walls, providing enough illumination to see by. The roof appeared sound despite its age, with only a few small holes that wouldn’t be an issue unless it rained. The wooden floor creaked but held his weight.

A stone fireplace occupied one wall, its chimney still straight and true. Dried leaves had blown in through the door, but otherwise the small space was remarkably clean. No signs of animals having made it their den.

“It’s not much,” he called to Angel, “but it should keep us warm for the night.”

“Anything’s better than that cave.” She shivered, wrapping her arms around herself.

Estaria helped her inside, settling her near the fireplace. He found some old furniture pieces that broke apart easily enough for firewood, and there was plenty of tinder from the dried leaves. The flint he’d used for the torch was still in his pocket, and soon a small fire crackled in the hearth, pushing back the darkness and chill.

In the flickering light, he could better examine Angel’s ankle. The swelling had increased during their journey, and dark bruising had begun to appear. She winced as he gently probed the injury.

“I don’t think it’s broken,” he said, “but you definitely won’t be walking far on it tonight.”

Angel leaned back against the wall, exhaustion evident in every line of her body. “Where do you think we are? I’ve never heard of a lake like this near Appledale.”

“Me neither.” Estaria sat beside her, his own weariness settling in now that the immediate crisis had passed. The fire’s warmth seeped into his bones, making his eyelids heavy. “That cave system must stretch farther than anyone realized.”

Through the gaps in the walls, he could see the willows swaying gently in the night breeze, their leaves whispering secrets to each other. The lake’s surface rippled, breaking the perfect reflection of stars. Despite the strangeness of their location and the events that had led them here, the scene held a peaceful quality that eased some of his worry.

“We’ll figure it out in the morning,” he said, pulling off his damp outer shirt and draping it near the fire to dry. “For now, we should try to rest.”

Angel nodded, already half-asleep. The firelight softened her features, painting them in warm golds that reminded him of autumn sunsets. She looked both vulnerable and strong, and something in his chest tightened at the sight.

The fire popped and settled, sending sparks up the chimney to join the stars above. Estaria fed it another piece of broken furniture, ensuring it would last through the night. The small space grew comfortably warm, and the familiar sound of crackling wood helped mask the unfamiliar noises of their strange surroundings.

The next morning Estaria woke before Angel, the fire long since burned to cold ashes. He carefully extracted his arm from beneath her sleeping form, and she mumbled something unintelligible, burrowing deeper into the makeshift bedding. He gathered fresh wood and leaves, coaxing life back into the embers. The familiar task helped ground him, pushing away the lingering unease from their predicament. By the time the flames were properly crackling again, warming the small space, he looked over to find Angel watching him work with a drowsy smile.

“Good morning. How’s the ankle?”

Angel gingerly touched it and winced. “Still tender.” She rotated her foot experimentally in a circle, testing its range of motion. “But seemingly functional.”

Estaria reached out a hand to help her to her feet, his grip gentle but firm. “Well let’s see if it will support your weight.”

She placed weight on it and winced, her fingers tightening around his. “I won’t be running the Appledale race anytime soon.”

“Ok sit back down. Let’s get some food in you, and make a brace and a crutch.”

With a sly smile that made his heart skip, Angel asked, “You’re not going to carry me home in your arms?”

Estaria chuckled, though the idea wasn’t entirely unappealing. “We don’t even know where we are. I’m going to step outside and see what I can see.” He threw some of the legs from the lone chair in her direction, not daring get too close to her, as he imagined carrying her back to Appledale in his arms. “See if you can brace that foot while I grab some berries or something.”

He missed her affronted look as he stepped outside into the fresh morning air. He inhaled deeply, tasting pristine air, as a smile crossed his face. Looking around, the lake sat in a small valley, its surface mirror-smooth in the early light, seemingly fed from an aquifer rather than a stream.

Estaria climbed the tallest hill, his boots crushing dewdrops from the grass, and scanned the horizon. There, maybe a mile away - Appledale. He spent a few more minutes picking out a route that Angel would be able to maneuver with her ankle, noting the gentler slopes and avoiding the rougher terrain, before hopping his way back down to the shack.

Ducking back into the shack, he saw that Angel had torn part of her dress to make the bindings for the brace, the fabric wrapped carefully around her ankle. His cheeks flushed as his eyes inadvertently trailed up her legs to her upper thighs, and he quickly looked away. She didn’t seem to notice his discomfort.

Estaria cleared his throat, showing a long sturdy branch he had discovered outside, its bark worn smooth as if by time and weather. “I think this should work as a crutch. We’re only a mile away from Appledale. There’s a path I think you should be able to use, even with that foot.”

Angel raised her hand, so he could help her up, but when he grasped her hand, she pulled him down, hard. He collapsed across her, and, acutely aware of her bare thighs beneath the torn dress, quickly pushed himself up, his face burning.

“Wha—” and then she was kissing him.

Estaria’s world narrowed to the soft press of Angel’s lips against his. Her mouth was warm and tasted faintly of honey-drops. His heart thundered in his chest, and for a moment, he forgot how to breathe. The morning sunlight filtering through the shack’s walls painted golden patterns across her face as she drew back slightly, her hazel eyes searching his.

Time seemed to slow. He noticed everything at once: the soft smell of apple blossoms that survived even their underground escapades, the way her auburn curls caught the light, the small freckle just below her left eye that he’d never noticed before. Her hands were still wrapped in the front of his shirt, holding him close.

“I’ve wanted to do that for a while now,” Angel whispered, her breath warm against his cheek.

Estaria’s hand trembled slightly as he reached up, his calloused fingers finding the soft curve of Angel’s cheek. Her skin was warm beneath his touch, and he could feel her pulse racing to match his own. Time stretched like honey as he leaned in, his lips meeting hers with gentle certainty.

The morning light painted everything in soft gold, filtering through the weathered walls of the shack. The scent of damp earth and apple blossoms surrounded them, mingling with the lingering woodsmoke from their fire. Angel’s fingers tightened in his shirt, pulling him closer.

This kiss was different from the first—slower, deeper, filled with all the words they hadn’t said over the years. His thumb traced small circles on her cheek as their lips moved together. The rough fabric of his shirt rustled between them, and somewhere outside, a morning dove called to its mate.

Angel sighed softly against his mouth, and Estaria felt the sound echo through his entire being. Her free hand found its way to the nape of his neck, fingers threading through his hair. The touch sent shivers down his spine, and he deepened the kiss instinctively, wanting to memorize every detail of this moment.

The worn floorboards creaked beneath them, and the morning breeze whispered through the gaps in the walls. But Estaria noticed these things only distantly, his world narrowed to the points where they connected: his hand on her cheek, her fingers in his hair, their lips moving in perfect synchronization.

Her auburn curls tickled his wrist where he cradled her face, and he could taste the lingering sweetness of yesterday’s honey-drops on her lips. The morning chill had no power here in their shared warmth, in this perfect moment that felt both eternal and fleeting.

When they finally parted, Estaria kept his hand on her cheek, unwilling to break contact completely. Angel’s eyes fluttered open, those familiar hazel depths now holding a new warmth that made his heart skip. A soft blush colored her cheeks beneath his fingers, and her lips curved into a smile that outshone the morning sun streaming through the cracks in the walls.

He traced the curve of her cheekbone with his thumb, memorizing the feeling of her skin against his, the way the light caught in her eyes, the soft sound of their mingled breathing in the quiet morning air. Her fingers were still tangled in his hair, and neither seemed inclined to move.

The moment stretched between them, fragile and precious as spun glass. Outside, birds continued their morning songs, and the breeze rustled through the willows by the lake. But here, in their weathered sanctuary, time seemed to hold its breath.

Angel’s smile widened, and she leaned her face into his palm, her eyes never leaving his. Her hand slipped from his hair to rest against his chest, where his heart beat a steady rhythm against her fingers. The morning light caught the gold threads in her hair, creating a halo effect that made her appear almost ethereal.

They sat there, wrapped in comfortable silence, as the sun climbed higher in the sky beyond their shelter. The light shifted and changed, painting new patterns across the worn floorboards, but neither moved to break the spell of the moment.

A bird called outside, startling them apart. Estaria cleared his throat, suddenly aware of their position on the floor. “We should probably head back before everyone starts worrying.”

“Probably,” Angel agreed, though she made no move to release him. Her eyes danced with mischief. “But I’m quite comfortable right here.”

Heat crept up his neck. “Your father might not share that opinion.”

“True.” She sighed dramatically, finally letting her arms drop. “Help me up?”

This time when he offered his hand, there were no surprises. Angel tested her weight on the makeshift crutch, grimacing slightly. “It’ll do,” she decided.

Estaria gathered their few belongings while she adjusted to the crutch’s height. The morning had warmed considerably, promising a pleasant walk back to town. He offered his arm for additional support, and Angel took it with a smile that made his stomach flip.

They set out across the dewy grass, moving slowly but steadily. The lake sparkled behind them, its surface now rippled by a gentle breeze. Angel paused occasionally to rest, but her determination never wavered.

“So,” she said during one such break, settled on a fallen log. “Are we going to talk about what happened in there?”

Estaria’s heart skipped. “Which part? The cave exploration or the…” He gestured vaguely, his cheeks warming.

“The kissing part,” Angel said directly, her hazel eyes meeting his with a confidence that had been absent in the cave. This was the Angel he knew - straightforward, unafraid. The sight of her returning to herself made his heart lighter.

“No!” The word burst out louder than he intended. He lowered his voice.

His heart raced as he met Angel’s direct gaze. “No, I don’t want to pretend it didn’t happen.” Estaria ran a hand through his dark hair, struggling to find the right words. “I’ve… I’ve wanted to kiss you for a long time.”

Angel’s smile brightened the entire clearing. “Good. Because I plan on doing it again.” She reached for her crutch. “But first, we should probably get back before my father sends out a search party.”

Estaria helped her up, steadying her as she found her balance. The morning sun warmed their shoulders as they picked their way carefully along the path he’d scouted earlier. Angel’s determination showed in every step, though he noticed her wincing more frequently as they progressed.

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