Orin
Estaria’s knuckles whitened around the makeshift torch. Every shadow between the ancient trees drew his attention, every rustle of leaves made him pause. The weapon felt reassuring in his grip, even as he chided himself for his paranoia.
“It’s been weeks,” he muttered, adjusting the pack that had grown heavier with their collection of experimental torches. “No creature would stalk prey that long.”
Sentinel’s wooden hide creaked as they walked, the sound mixing with birdsong and the gentle whisper of wind through leaves. The forest’s familiar scents - earth, decay, and the sweet tang of unusual flowers - filled each breath. Shafts of sunlight pierced the canopy, creating patches of warmth on Estaria’s skin as they walked.
His feet found the path automatically now, stepping over roots and avoiding the clusters of mushrooms that Sentinel had shown him were poisonous. The routine had become so familiar that he almost collided with Sentinel when the creature halted abruptly.
The dense forest suddenly gave way to open sky. Estaria blinked, his eyes adjusting to the brightness. Unlike the previous clearing with its elaborate mural, this glade was stark and simple. Tall grass swayed in the breeze, dotted with small white flowers. At its center stood another obsidian obelisk, its surface gleaming in the direct sunlight.
The number ‘2’ caught his eye immediately, the resonance writing seeming to shimmer and shift as he looked at it. The marking stirred something in his memory - the vision of five stones, each representing someone from his past.
A heavy thud behind him made him turn. Sentinel had settled across the path they’d arrived on, massive form effectively blocking any retreat. The creature’s yellow eyes met his, unblinking and expectant.
“Really?” Estaria sighed, studying Sentinel’s positioning. “That’s a bit obvious, isn’t it?”
Sentinel’s tail swept once, decisively. The message was clear - forward was the only option.
Estaria shifted the torch to his other hand, wiping sweaty palms on his trousers. The glade felt exposed after so long under the forest canopy. Wind touched his face, carrying the sweet scent of the white flowers. Birds called in the distance, their songs somehow muted compared to the forest proper.
His boots crushed grass as he approached the obelisk. Unlike the first one, this stone stood alone - no convenient stumps for resting, no murals to study. Just the singular black pillar rising from the earth like an accusing finger.
The surface looked smoother than the previous obelisk, almost glassy. Estaria could see his reflection distorted in its surface - tired eyes, clothes showing wear from weeks of forest travel. He’d lost weight, he realized, his face looking leaner than he remembered.
“I don’t suppose you’ll tell me what to expect this time?” he called back to Sentinel.
The creature’s only response was to settle more firmly across the path, claws digging into the earth.
“Didn’t think so.” Estaria set his pack down carefully, keeping the torch in hand. After the last obelisk’s visions, he wasn’t taking any chances. The memory of being trapped in Leona’s test still felt raw, like pressing on a fresh bruise.
The number ‘2’ drew his attention again. The resonance writing seemed to pulse faintly, as though responding to his proximity. Or perhaps responding to his own resonance? He still understood so little about how it all worked.
Estaria sat cross-legged before the obelisk, and started reading the resonance memories the Obelisk contained.
The acrid smell of smoke jolted Estaria’s eyes open. A small flame flickered through the underbrush at the clearing’s edge, tongues of orange dancing against the green foliage. His heart thundered in his chest as he scanned for Sentinel, but the guardian had vanished.
He scrambled to his feet, leaves and grass clinging to his clothes. The few heartbeats it took to cross the clearing were enough for the fire to grow exponentially, its heat now a physical force pushing against him. The flames reached higher, consuming branches and leaves with frightening speed. Sweat beaded on his forehead, both from exertion and the intense heat.
Dropping to his knees, Estaria clawed at the earth, rich soil breaking apart under his fingers. The ground was surprisingly dry despite the forest’s usual dampness. As he gathered a handful of dirt, a familiar voice cut through the crackle of burning wood.
“It’s too late for smothering,” Orin said. “You need to try to isolate the blaze.”
Estaria’s mind raced with questions - how was Orin here? Was this another vision? But the heat of the fire felt too real, too immediate for philosophical debates. The flames were spreading faster than any natural fire should, already threatening to engulf the nearby trees.
His hands found his knife, and he attacked the undergrowth with desperate intensity. Branches snapped under his blade, thorns catching and tearing at his sleeves. The smoke burned his eyes and throat as he worked, creating a barrier between the fire and the rest of the forest. Sweat ran down his back, his muscles screaming as he hacked away anything that could feed the flames.
Dead leaves and fallen branches flew behind him as he cleared the ground. The fire roared louder, as if angry at his interference. Heat pressed against his face, making it harder to breathe with each passing moment. His lungs burned, but he couldn’t stop. Wouldn’t stop. Not with the memory of another fire, another failure, still haunting his dreams.
The knife grew slick in his grip as he continued to work, the blade catching on particularly stubborn vines. The clearing’s peaceful atmosphere had transformed into a hellscape of orange light and choking smoke. Through watering eyes, he could make out Orin’s form, standing unnaturally still amid the chaos.
Time seemed to stretch and compress simultaneously as he fought to contain the blaze. His world narrowed to the rhythm of cut, clear, move forward. Each breath came harder than the last, the smoke now a thick curtain around him. But he pressed on, driven by the urgent need to stop this fire before it could spread, before it could become another Appledale.
The heat was unbearable now, his skin feeling tight and burned despite his distance from the flames. His arms ached from the repetitive motion of cutting and clearing, but he couldn’t allow himself to slow down. Not with the fire still growing, still threatening to consume everything in its path.
A branch above cracked ominously, weakened by the flames. Estaria barely managed to dodge as it crashed down beside him, sending up a shower of sparks. The burning wood landed exactly where he’d been standing moments before, its impact sending embers dancing through the air like malevolent fireflies.
“Too late, you need to run. There was a river back east. You can get there!” Orin’s voice cut through the roar of flames.
Estaria spun eastward, his legs carrying him through the burning forest. The smoke made his eyes water, and each breath burned in his lungs. Behind him, the fire moved with unnatural speed, consuming everything in its path. The heat pressed against his back like a physical force.
Branches whipped past his face as he ran. The forest floor, usually treacherous with roots and undergrowth, seemed oddly clear. Through the haze of smoke and fear, he caught glimpses of Orin somehow twenty feet ahead, gesturing urgently.
“Just a bit more, you’re almost there!” Orin called, his voice carrying clearly despite the inferno’s roar.
Estaria lowered his head and pushed harder, his muscles screaming in protest. Sweat ran down his face, mixing with tears from the smoke. The fire kept pace, matching his speed with terrifying precision. The flames danced at the edge of his vision, reaching for him with hungry fingers.
Minutes stretched as he ran, each step becoming harder than the last. But something nagged at the back of his mind, cutting through the panic. His thoughts, clouded by fear and exhaustion, slowly began to clear.
There wasn’t a river to the east.
The realization hit him like a physical blow. He’d spent weeks in this forest with Sentinel. The river lay to the south, not east. His pace slowed as another thought surfaced - how had Orin gotten ahead of him? The older man had been behind him when the fire started.
Estaria’s feet stopped moving. The raging inferno closed the distance with disturbing speed, but his mind raced faster. The unnaturally clear path. Orin’s voice carrying perfectly through the roar of flames. The fire’s impossible speed.
He stood his ground as the wall of fire bore down on him, his heart thundering in his chest. The heat was overwhelming, the smoke thick enough to choke on, but something felt wrong about all of this.
Orin’s desperate calls echoed from ahead. “Come on! You’re almost there!” Through the smoke and flames, his figure waved urgently, beckoning Estaria forward.
Estaria approached slowly, his mind finally clear despite the inferno raging around him. “There’s no river east,” he said, voice rough from smoke. “The river is south.”
Orin’s form flickered like a mirage and vanished. In that same instant, the fire surged forward, engulfing Estaria in a wave of searing heat. His scream tore through the roar of flames as agony consumed every inch of his body. The pain was beyond anything he’d imagined possible - his flesh bubbling, melting away from bone. Whatever illusion had conjured Orin, this fire burned with terrible reality.
His legs gave way, and he collapsed into the burning undergrowth. The world became nothing but pain and the acrid stench of his own burning flesh. Through it all, his mind remained horribly, perfectly conscious, registering every excruciating moment until darkness finally claimed him.
The transition was jarring. One moment he burned, the next he sat cross-legged before the obsidian obelisk. His clothes were intact, his skin whole, but phantom pain still crawled across his body. The memory of burning was so vivid he could taste ash on his tongue, feel the heat blistering his skin.
Something wasn’t right. The smoke filling his nostrils wasn’t just a lingering memory. His eyes snapped open, darting around the glade. Sentinel had vanished. At the clearing’s edge, angry orange flames were just beginning to catch in the underbrush, sending tendrils of dark smoke curling into the air.
Estaria pushed himself to his feet, muscles protesting from sitting so long. The acrid smoke stung his nostrils as he turned toward the growing flames at the clearing’s edge. His heart raced, but his mind remained clear. The fire spread with unnatural speed, consuming the underbrush with frightening efficiency.
A movement caught his eye. There stood Orin, exactly where he’d appeared in the vision, his form solid and real in the growing haze of smoke.
“Too late for smothering. You need to isolate the fire so it can’t spread,” Orin called out, gesturing urgently toward the knife at Estaria’s belt.
Instead of drawing his blade, Estaria dropped to his knees, fingers digging into the rich forest soil. The earth felt cool and damp beneath the surface, despite the growing heat of the flames. He ignored Orin’s increasingly frantic instructions to start cutting the underbrush, focusing instead on gathering handfuls of dirt.
The soil scattered across the flames, but the fire merely danced around it, growing higher and hotter. Sweat trickled down Estaria’s back as he worked, the heat pressing against his face like a physical wall. More dirt followed, yet the flames seemed to mock his efforts, spreading faster than he could throw.
“It’s not working!” Orin’s voice cut through the roar of the fire. “There’s a river back east, you can make it!”
Estaria’s legs burned as he pushed himself up, but instead of following Orin’s direction, he turned south. The heat chased him as he ran, branches whipping past his face. The fire pursued with impossible speed, consuming everything in its path. Smoke filled his lungs, making each breath a struggle.
Trees blurred past as he ran southward, searching for the river he knew should be there. But the familiar landmarks were gone, transformed by the inferno into an alien landscape of flame and shadow. His legs carried him forward, even as doubt crept in. Where was the river? He should have reached it by now.
Through the smoke ahead, Orin’s figure appeared again. “You’re almost there!”
Estaria skidded to a halt, chest heaving. The wall of flame bore down on him, close enough that he could feel his skin beginning to blister. He planted his feet firmly on the ground, muscles tensing as he waited for the inevitable.
He’d learned this lesson before. Running wouldn’t save him.
The fire surged forward, and agony consumed him.
Estaria sat before the obsidian obelisk, his entire body trembling with phantom pain. The memory of flames consuming his flesh remained vivid, raw, and visceral. Smoke tickled his nostrils - not memory this time, but real. He knew without looking that flames would be licking at the clearing’s edge once again.
His mind raced through his previous attempts. Following Orin’s instructions had led to death by fire. Rejecting them completely had yielded the same result. The problem wasn’t the instructions - it was his approach. He knew nothing about fighting fires, but he did know about fighting shadows.
The thought struck him like lightning. The shadow creature that had attacked Sentinel - they’d theorized that enough light would make it solid. Could the opposite be true? Could enough light cast shadows deep enough to extinguish the fire?
His shoulders slumped in defeat. Where would he find light that bright in a burning forest? His arm brushed against something at his hip, and the touch of Angel’s dagger sparked a memory.
He was back in the cabin, grief-stricken and screaming at the sky. The dagger had blazed with an unnatural light, brighter than anything he’d ever seen. The memory was so clear it made his chest ache.
With trembling fingers, Estaria drew the dagger. Heat pressed against his back as the fire grew closer, but he forced himself to remain seated. He held the blade out before him, positioning it so his shadow would fall across the approaching flames.
Drawing a deep breath, Estaria reached for his resonance, aligning it with the dagger. The connection formed instantly, but this was different from anything he’d experienced before. All the grief, rage, and loss he’d poured into the blade over countless nights came rushing back.
The pain drove him to the ground. Angel’s face filled his mind - her smile, the way her eyes crinkled at the corners when she laughed. The future they’d planned together. Their unborn child. Each memory cut deeper than any blade.
Tears streamed down his face as the dagger began to glow. The light grew steadily brighter, feeding off his pain, his loss, his love. It blazed like a fallen star, casting everything in harsh relief.
Behind him, the roar of flames suddenly ceased. The oppressive heat vanished, leaving only the cool forest air against his skin. Through his tears, he heard footsteps approaching.
“Remember when I taught you to sharpen a knife?” Orin’s voice came from behind him. “Remember what I said?”
Estaria gasped through his sobs, the words coming between ragged breaths. “Don’t do it like that. Your hands aren’t my hands. Find your own rhythm.”
Estaria sat before the obsidian obelisk, his breath coming in ragged gasps as the vision’s intensity faded. The phantom sensation of flames licking his skin diminished with each passing moment, replaced by the forest’s familiar coolness. His fingers traced the sheathed dagger at his hip, feeling the familiar weight that carried so much of his buried grief.
The clearing remained peaceful, undisturbed by fire or smoke. Sentinel stood guard at the edge, his bark-like form nearly invisible against the forest’s backdrop. The creature’s yellow eyes tracked every subtle movement, watching with that peculiar mix of protectiveness and evaluation that had become familiar during their time together.
Tears continued to stream down Estaria’s face, but the crushing weight of remembered loss began to ease. He’d poured so much pain into the dagger over those long, dark nights - all the grief for Angel, their unborn child, the future they’d never have. That pain still lived in the blade, a constant companion he carried at his hip.
His hand wrapped around the dagger’s hilt, and the familiar ache bloomed in his chest. Not the sharp, overwhelming agony of fresh grief, but something deeper and more permanent. Like scar tissue that pulled with every movement, a reminder of wounds that had healed but would never truly fade.
The forest’s ambient sounds filtered back into his awareness - leaves rustling in the gentle breeze, distant bird calls, the soft clicking of Sentinel’s claws against stone as the creature shifted position. The normalcy of these sounds helped ground him in the present moment, pulling him further from the vision’s lingering effects.
Wiping his eyes with his sleeve, Estaria drew in a deep breath of the forest’s rich air. Pine needles, damp earth, and something uniquely alive filled his lungs, washing away the remembered scent of smoke and burning flesh. His legs felt steady as he pushed himself to his feet, though exhaustion pulled at every muscle.
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